Oh my gosh, I would so beta this for you. I'm sure others have already offered to help, but if it makes a difference, English is my native language and I'm exceptionally particular about punctuation, spelling and grammar. Oh, I also Majored in English Lit in university!

Anyway, this is probably the first time I've ever commented on SHINee fic (bad person, I realise) but wow. I have words, they're just not coming out.