I know I should simply write a comment like: "OMFG FHGFIHGNIFUD THIS FIC IS JUST TOO FREAKING AMAZING!!"
BUT! When I read fics and I fall unconditionally in love with them (yeah, just like Jongkey love :D) I can't help myself from writing an unbearably shupa long review comment :) I hope you won't mind^^
I'm yours. You're mine. This is the most beautiful sentence I've ever read or know in my life. Just the thought of Kibum that said it to Jonghyun has made my heart pounding like crazy. I cried so badly at that scene because it was too damn touching to not cry ;___;
Well, the whole story was touching actually. Its development is slow, yet so meaningful. I was so impressed you included numerous themes I personally love, such as the achievement of your dream, the loneliness and so the need of someone else at your side, the hard life of a idol (I was especially impressed by this one :D) and love of course, that kind of love that makes you heart pounding and beat like crazy, and that makes you feel the urge to cry...
At first I though that reading about Kibum being blind was somehow painful and pitiful at the same time, and Jonghyun acted so gentle to him. I've also thought they were meant to be together ever since they met, although Kibum's blindness would have stood in the way of their eventual future together.
The metro scene was the most priceless one! Jonghyun pretended he didn't know Kibum wasn't blind. The latter made a fool of himself and then he gave up at his acting. Still he thought Jonghyun was the weird one XD Kibum character never change, after all.
Their love story developed in a kind of fantastic way. Jonghyun told Kibum he like him right away and just because of this it was FANTASTIC! I think Kibum had hoped that, that's why he didn't believe Jonghyun at the first place. Kibum changed his mind after looking at Jonghyun hurt expression... OMG MY HEART COULDN'T BEAR THIS CONFESSION ;___; (lol I'm still fangirling after all) Of course, Kibum liked Jonghyun back.
Also, the whole 'Jacket' thing was really funny, fluffy and precious, I love the fact Kibum never handed it back :)
When Kibum read about Jonghyun's group's disbandment, my eyes widened as well (after LOLing at the band's name XD) and I imagined Kibum would have gone to Jonghyun's apartment as soon as he could. And when he did. OMG SERIOUSLY, HOW MUCH I LOVED THAT SCENE, I can't even describe it with words, that's why I cried ;____;
Well, the rest of the fic just suit the story, especially the ending, totally love how the fic ended so abruptly (this is one of the numerous things I loved about your fic, the way every scene is interrupted *__* I wish I could do the same when I write something....), it was the best way, really^^
*pauses, goes into the bed because it's 1am lol*
Now, onto Kibum's character :D At first, I thought he was OOC XD OMG Kind Kibum isn't something you read often in Jongkey fics. To tell the truth, I liked that side of him, especially when he smiled at Jonghyun when he handed the flower he had just bought to him :) I totally imagined it as the sweetest smile^^ Anyway, Kibum was rather good at changing his personality when he was 'blind' and when he wasn't. Beside, the way his character developed is GREAT! When he used the meaning of 2nd flower to express his feelings I had the feeling that Kibum's character in the story could have been resumed with that meaningful flower. That was kind of sweet :) I loved the idea.
Without Jonghyun, Kibum would have remained the boy who sold flowers and pretended to be another person. Withou Kibum, Jonghyun could have never overcome the depression he was getting into... The proof of Jongkey that complete each other is just here, your story :)
Aish now I'm feeling really sorry for filling this page with my random thoughts ;___; This took me really a lot, I had to read the fic for a 2nd time in order to catch all the details^^ I even played a playlist on itunes while reading it again, which I called "Meaningful songs while reading Jecca's new fic".... I'M NOT EVEN JOKING lol
Anyway, THANKS FOR MAKING MY DAY, I LOVE YOU♥♥
(Sorry for my mistakes, I'm feeling so sleepy that I won't be able to correct the whole comment XD)
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"OMFG FHGFIHGNIFUD THIS FIC IS JUST TOO FREAKING AMAZING!!"
BUT! When I read fics and I fall unconditionally in love with them (yeah, just like Jongkey love :D) I can't help myself from writing an unbearably shupa long
reviewcomment :) I hope you won't mind^^I'm yours. You're mine. This is the most beautiful sentence I've ever read or know in my life. Just the thought of Kibum that said it to Jonghyun has made my heart pounding like crazy. I cried so badly at that scene because it was too damn touching to not cry ;___;
Well, the whole story was touching actually. Its development is slow, yet so meaningful. I was so impressed you included numerous themes I personally love, such as the achievement of your dream, the loneliness and so the need of someone else at your side, the hard life of a idol (I was especially impressed by this one :D) and love of course, that kind of love that makes you heart pounding and beat like crazy, and that makes you feel the urge to cry...
At first I though that reading about Kibum being blind was somehow painful and pitiful at the same time, and Jonghyun acted so gentle to him. I've also thought they were meant to be together ever since they met, although Kibum's blindness would have stood in the way of their eventual future together.
The metro scene was the most priceless one! Jonghyun pretended he didn't know Kibum wasn't blind. The latter made a fool of himself and then he gave up at his acting. Still he thought Jonghyun was the weird one XD Kibum character never change, after all.
Their love story developed in a kind of fantastic way. Jonghyun told Kibum he like him right away and just because of this it was FANTASTIC!
I think Kibum had hoped that, that's why he didn't believe Jonghyun at the first place. Kibum changed his mind after looking at Jonghyun hurt expression... OMG MY HEART COULDN'T BEAR THIS CONFESSION ;___; (lol I'm still fangirling after all)
Of course, Kibum liked Jonghyun back.
Also, the whole 'Jacket' thing was really funny, fluffy and precious, I love the fact Kibum never handed it back :)
When Kibum read about Jonghyun's group's disbandment, my eyes widened as well (after LOLing at the band's name XD) and I imagined Kibum would have gone to Jonghyun's apartment as soon as he could.
And when he did. OMG SERIOUSLY, HOW MUCH I LOVED THAT SCENE, I can't even describe it with words, that's why I cried ;____;
Well, the rest of the fic just suit the story, especially the ending, totally love how the fic ended so abruptly (this is one of the numerous things I loved about your fic, the way every scene is interrupted *__* I wish I could do the same when I write something....), it was the best way, really^^
*pauses, goes into the bed because it's 1am lol*
Now, onto Kibum's character :D
At first, I thought he was OOC XD OMG Kind Kibum isn't something you read often in Jongkey fics. To tell the truth, I liked that side of him, especially when he smiled at Jonghyun when he handed the flower he had just bought to him :) I totally imagined it as the sweetest smile^^
Anyway, Kibum was rather good at changing his personality when he was 'blind' and when he wasn't. Beside, the way his character developed is GREAT!
When he used the meaning of 2nd flower to express his feelings I had the feeling that Kibum's character in the story could have been resumed with that meaningful flower. That was kind of sweet :) I loved the idea.
Without Jonghyun, Kibum would have remained the boy who sold flowers and pretended to be another person. Withou Kibum, Jonghyun could have never overcome the depression he was getting into... The proof of Jongkey that complete each other is just here, your story :)
Aish now I'm feeling really sorry for filling this page with my random thoughts ;___; This took me really a lot, I had to read the fic for a 2nd time in order to catch all the details^^
I even played a playlist on itunes while reading it again, which I called "Meaningful songs while reading Jecca's new fic".... I'M NOT EVEN JOKING lol
Anyway, THANKS FOR MAKING MY DAY, I LOVE YOU♥♥
(Sorry for my mistakes, I'm feeling so sleepy that I won't be able to correct the whole comment XD)