Yep, it's intended. The first paragraph was for normalcy, to show what Kibum's routine is, and the second two indicate the change :)
Yeah, I have problems with run-ons. I try to make it so that the feeling you get when reading is as in a rush as what's happening. Probably shouldn't XD I'll take note of this. Really? I didn't think haphazardly is a 'big' word XD It's pretty standard to me; it's the first that came to mind when I see people throw things around without caring, rofl. If it's bothersome, just think of it as one of those tween books that put in vocabulary words, wahahaha.
And you're right about the repitition, I tend to do that, I don't even know whyyy. /sobs My cousin pointed that out to me too in my other fic, lol.
Crap, word spell check isn't reliable D<
Thank you so much ♥ Want to beta the rest of my shit for me? :DD rofl
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Date: 2010-05-28 07:07 am (UTC)Yeah, I have problems with run-ons. I try to make it so that the feeling you get when reading is as in a rush as what's happening. Probably shouldn't XD I'll take note of this.
Really? I didn't think haphazardly is a 'big' word XD It's pretty standard to me; it's the first that came to mind when I see people throw things around without caring, rofl. If it's bothersome, just think of it as one of those tween books that put in vocabulary words, wahahaha.
And you're right about the repitition, I tend to do that, I don't even know whyyy. /sobs My cousin pointed that out to me too in my other fic, lol.
Crap, word spell check isn't reliable D<
Thank you so much ♥ Want to beta the rest of my shit for me? :DD rofl